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Chapter 16: Ranking Update.

As Mr. Thompson left my room, I was left alone with my thoughts, my mind racing with doubts and uncertainties. Maybe he's right, I thought to myself, maybe I am being immature. Maybe I'm just overreacting to the whole situation. I want to be mature, I want him to see me as a grown-up, not some whiny kid who can't handle a little praise.
I sat back down on my bed, my eyes gazing blankly at the wall as I tried to process my thoughts. I thought about what Mr. Thompson had said, about how I deserved the praise, about how I was being too sensitive. Maybe he's right, I thought, maybe I do deserve it. Maybe I am being too sensitive.
But then I thought about my teammates, about how they had worked just as hard as I had, about how they had contributed just as much to our win. I thought about how they had supported me, encouraged me, and pushed me to be my best. And I thought about how Mr. Thompson had ignored them, how he had made it seem like I was the only one who mattered.
I felt a surge of frustration and confusion. I didn't know what to think, I didn't know what to feel. Part of me wanted to believe that Mr. Thompson was right, that I was being immature and overly sensitive. But another part of me knew that something wasn't right, that something didn't feel fair.
I stood up and walked over to my window, looking out at the sky as I tried to clear my head. I took a few deep breaths, trying to calm myself down, trying to think more clearly. And then, slowly but surely, my thoughts began to clarify.
I realized that I wasn't being immature, that I wasn't being overly sensitive. I was just standing up for what I believed in, for what I thought was right. I was standing up for my teammates, for their hard work and dedication. And I was standing up for myself, for my own sense of self-worth and self-respect.
I thought about all the times I had worked hard, all the times I had pushed myself to be my best. I thought about all the times I had supported my teammates, encouraged them, and helped them to be their best. And I knew that I wasn't just doing it for myself, I was doing it for all of us.
I felt a sense of pride and determination wash over me, a sense of knowing that I was doing the right thing. And I knew that no matter what Mr. Thompson said, no matter what anyone else said, I would always stand up for what I believed in. I would always stand up for what was right.
As I went downstairs for dinner, Mr. Thompson was already seated at the table, his phone in hand, a sly smile spreading across his face. He looked up at me with a glint in his eye and said, "Hey, Gabriel, come check this out. I think you're going to like it."
I walked over to him, curiosity getting the better of me, wondering what he wanted to show me. He turned his phone around, revealing the Wonder Kids ranking list on the screen, and my eyes widened in shock as I saw my name at the top of the list, in first place.
"Whoa, what's this?" I asked, my voice filled with excitement and disbelief, as if I couldn't quite process what I was seeing.
Mr. Thompson chuckled, clearly pleased with himself. "You're now the number one ranked player in the Wonder Kids league," he said, beaming with pride, his voice filled with warmth and admiration. "Congratulations, Gabriel! You've worked hard for this."
I couldn't believe my eyes, my mind racing with thoughts of all the hard work, dedication, and perseverance that had led to this moment. I felt an overwhelming sense of happiness and accomplishment wash over me, like a wave crashing on the shore.
"Wow, this is amazing!" I exclaimed, my voice filled with emotion, as I stared at the screen in awe. "Thank you, Mr. Thompson! Thank you for everything! Your coaching, your guidance, your support...it's all paid off!"
Mr. Thompson smiled and put a hand on my shoulder, his eyes shining with pride. "You deserve it, Gabriel. You've put in the hard work and dedication. I'm just proud to be your coach and to have played a small part in your success."
I looked at the list again, taking in the names of the other players, the other young potential best players around the country, and I felt a sense of pride knowing that we were all doing well, that we were all working together towards a common goal.
"This is incredible," I said, still in awe, my voice filled with wonder. "I'm so happy to be part of this team, to be working with such talented and dedicated players."
Mr. Thompson nodded, his expression serious. "You should be proud, Gabriel. You're an amazing player and an even better person. Keep up the good work, and never forget that teamwork and sportsmanship are just as important as individual achievement."
I grinned, feeling like I was on top of the world, like nothing could bring me down. "I will, Mr. Thompson. I won't let you down. I won't let myself down."
We sat down to dinner, the delicious aroma of Mom's cooking filling the air, tantalizing our taste buds and making our stomachs growl with anticipation. Mr. Thompson and I exchanged a look, both of us still grinning from the excitement of the Wonder Kids ranking list, our faces flushed with happiness and pride. Mom, oblivious to our earlier conversation, launched into a story about her day at the hospital, her eyes sparkling with amusement and her voice filled with enthusiasm.
"You won't believe what happened today," she said, pausing for dramatic effect. "I was working on the pediatric ward, and one of my little patients decided to play a trick on me. Timmy, this little scamp, he's about six years old, and he's always getting into mischief. He's got a wild imagination and a heart of gold, and he always keeps me on my toes."
Mr. Thompson and I leaned in, interested, our faces inches from Mom's as we waited for her to continue. "What happened?" I asked, my voice barely above a whisper.
Mom chuckled, a throaty sound that made us both smile. "Well, Timmy decided to hide my stethoscope and then pretend to be a doctor, examining all the other kids in the ward. He was so serious, so intent on his work, that I couldn't help but laugh."
Mr. Thompson laughed, a deep, rumbling sound that made Mom smile. "That's hilarious!" he exclaimed. "I'm sure you were impressed by his medical skills."
Mom playfully rolled her eyes, her expression wry. "Oh, absolutely. He was very thorough, I'll give him that. He checked their temperatures, their blood pressure, and even listened to their heartbeats with a toy stethoscope. But then, he started prescribing ice cream and pizza to all the kids, and I had to step in before things got out of hand."
I giggled, the sound bubbling up from deep inside me. "I'm sure that was a tough job, Mom," I said, my voice teasing.
Mom smiled, her eyes crinkling at the corners. "It's all in a day's work, sweetie. But the best part was when Timmy turned to me and said, 'Doctor Thompson, can I have a lollipop now?'"
Mr. Thompson and I burst out laughing, the sound filling the room and making Mom smile. "That's amazing," Mr. Thompson said, wiping tears from his eyes. "I'm sure you were proud of him."
Mom nodded, her expression warm. "I was, actually. He's a sweet kid, and he's going to make a great doctor one day."

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