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Chapter 6: The Unseen Door

“The door was always there, just out of sight—a flicker in the corner of my vision, a whisper of something beyond. No one else seemed to notice it, but I could feel its pull, like a secret begging to be discovered.”
Every evening, as the sun went down and shadows started to dance in my room, I found myself drawn to that spot. It stood at the far end of the hallway—an ordinary door framed by ordinary walls, pero sa akin, it felt anything but mundane. To my family and friends, it was just a door; to me, it was a gateway to the unknown, a siren call echoing in my mind.
“Hey, Ael! Nandiyan ka ba?” My best friend, Mira, knocked on my door, breaking my reverie. I snapped back to reality, shaking my head as if to clear the fog of fascination that enveloped me.
“Yeah, just... coming!” I called, trying to sound casual. My voice was a bit too high-pitched, and I knew it. I pushed myself off the desk, scattering notes and pens everywhere. They clattered like my anxious thoughts. I wanted to ignore the door, pero sobrang hirap talagang i-dismiss ang feeling na naidudulot nito sa akin—a mix of curiosity and dread.
As I opened the door to let Mira in, the soft scent of vanilla from her candle wafted through the air, mixing with the faint aroma of my neglected coffee. She walked in, her curly hair bouncing, her eyes bright with excitement.
“Ael, did you finish the research paper? You promised you’d help me with mine!” she exclaimed, plopping onto my bed and tossing her backpack aside. “I can’t believe you’ve been holed up in here all day! What’s up with you lately?”
I could feel the door behind me, as if it were alive, breathing against my back. “Yeah, I’m working on it. It’s just… a lot to think about.” I forced a smile, but Mira narrowed her eyes, clearly not buying my facade.
“Seriously, what’s up? You’ve been acting all weird. Is it about that door again?” she asked, tilting her head, her tone teasing but genuinely concerned.
I turned away, running a hand through my hair, the frustration simmering inside me. “It’s just a door, Mira. I told you that already.”
“But you can’t keep ignoring it! You know it’s there. You’ve mentioned it like a million times!” she replied, her voice lowering as she leaned closer. “What if it’s something more?”
“More? Like what, ghosts? Or maybe a portal to another dimension?” I laughed, but the sound felt hollow. Inside, the pull of the door was stronger than any joke I could muster.
Mira raised an eyebrow, her playful demeanor fading. “You can’t just dismiss it like that! What if it really leads somewhere? You’re the one obsessed with dimensions and alternate realities! You should be the first to explore it!”
A heavy silence filled the room, and I swallowed hard. My heart raced, each beat a reminder of the door’s haunting presence. It felt like a challenge, tempting me to unravel its mysteries, yet I feared what I might find. What if it opened to something I wasn’t ready to face?
“Ael? Okay ka lang?” Mira’s voice broke through my thoughts, pulling me back to the moment.
“Yeah, I’m fine,” I replied, forcing cheer into my tone. “Let’s just focus on your paper, okay?” I knew I was avoiding the conversation, but the truth felt too heavy to share. The tension gnawed at me—my obsession with that door was pulling me apart.
We spent the next hour brainstorming for her paper, laughter punctuating our serious moments. Yet, despite my efforts to immerse myself in our discussions, my mind kept drifting back to the door. It was like an itch I couldn’t scratch, an itch that felt dangerous.
Finally, as the evening deepened into night, I found myself alone again. The glow from my desk lamp cast shadows across the floor, stretching like fingers reaching for the unseen door. It beckoned, an enigma waiting to be unraveled.
“What if…” I whispered to myself, heart racing. What if I opened it? The thought sent shivers down my spine. “No,” I shook my head, trying to dismiss the idea. Yet, it lingered, refusing to let go.
I settled back into my chair, determined to push the thoughts aside and focus on my research. But as I sifted through my notes, the words blurred, the equations danced mockingly. The door seemed to mock my efforts too, its presence a constant reminder of my growing obsession.
As sleep crept in, I finally succumbed to its allure, promising myself I’d tackle it in the morning. But the night would not be so kind. Vivid dreams invaded my slumber, filled with twisted hallways and distant whispers, leading me to that same door—its surface worn and inviting, a promise of secrets just beyond reach.
When I awoke the next day, my resolve was wavering. I knew I had to confront the door. The thought of it haunted me, much like the shadows that lingered at the edges of my perception. I dressed quickly, my heartbeat echoing in my ears as I made my way down the hallway.
There it stood, innocuous yet charged with energy, waiting for me. I could hear the faint sounds of the outside world—birds chirping, cars honking—but all I could focus on was the door, the way it seemed to shimmer at the edges, as if alive.
Taking a deep breath, I reached for the handle.
What lay beyond it? Would I find the answers I sought or plunge deeper into the unknown?
As I stood there, heart racing, I knew this was just the beginning. The unseen door had opened to something far beyond my understanding.
The air around me felt thick with tension, like the moment before a storm. I hesitated, my hand hovering over the doorknob. “Baka masyadong OA na ‘to,” I muttered to myself, trying to convince my racing heart that this was just another door in my house, not some portal to a hidden universe. But deep down, I knew it was anything but ordinary.
My thoughts raced. What if I just open it? The image of what lay behind the door haunted me, an insistent whisper. Was it just my imagination? A trick of the light? Or was there truly something more? I took another deep breath, feeling my pulse quicken, the anticipation mingling with fear.
“Okay, Aelion. Just one little turn. You can do this,” I said, half-trying to reassure myself and half-excited at the thought of uncovering the mystery.
With a trembling hand, I gripped the cold brass doorknob. I could hear the faint creaking of the floorboards, like they were holding their breath alongside me. Just turn it, I urged myself.
Finally, I twisted the knob, and the door clicked open, revealing nothing but darkness on the other side. A sudden chill ran down my spine, causing me to shiver. “What the heck?” I whispered, peering into the abyss. The air was thick with the scent of something ancient—dust mingled with the faintest hint of decay, like a long-forgotten secret waiting to be unearthed.
“Baka meron talagang multo dito,” I joked nervously, trying to lighten the moment, but my voice echoed back, swallowed by the darkness. Or worse, what if it’s nothing? The thought stung, cutting deeper than I wanted to admit.
“Mira wouldn’t let me hear the end of it if I tell her I just stood here staring at a door,” I muttered. Yet, I couldn’t shake off the feeling that I was standing at the edge of something vast, something that could change everything.
I took a step forward, heart pounding. “Let’s go, Ael!” I whispered, rallying my courage like a pep talk before a big game. I knew I had to face whatever was lurking in the shadows.
As I stepped through the threshold, the darkness enveloped me, cool and almost inviting. I flicked on the light on my phone, the weak beam cutting through the gloom. My heart raced as I ventured further inside, the air around me buzzing with energy, as if it were alive.
“Okay, let’s do this!” I chanted under my breath, my voice barely above a whisper. The walls felt like they were closing in, but my curiosity pushed me onward. Each step resonated in the silence, echoing like a heartbeat.
Suddenly, the light revealed a narrow passageway lined with dusty shelves, filled with old books and strange artifacts that seemed to whisper stories of their own. My breath hitched. “Wow, what is this place?” I mumbled, brushing my fingers over the spines of the books, their titles barely legible in the dim light.
Then I noticed something peculiar—a small, ornate box sitting on a pedestal in the corner. It glimmered faintly, as if it were calling to me. “Sana mayaman ako para bilhin ko ‘to,” I joked, stepping closer, my heart racing with a mix of excitement and dread.
As I reached for the box, I felt a chill sweep through the room, making me pause. “Okay, Ael, this isn’t a horror movie,” I muttered, shaking my head. But the sense of foreboding was palpable.
I lifted the box carefully, its weight surprising me. What secrets are you hiding? I thought, glancing around the dimly lit space, half-expecting something to jump out at me. Instead, the silence deepened, stretching into something almost tangible.
“Anong meron dito?” I whispered, opening the box with trembling hands. Inside, I found a collection of intricate objects—a key, a small compass, and what looked like an old, faded map. My heart raced as I examined them, the adrenaline coursing through me. Was this the key to understanding the door?
“Wow, ito ‘yung mga stuff na nasa mga adventure movies!” I exclaimed softly, my excitement bubbling over. “Pero seriously, what is this doing here?” The map looked ancient, its edges frayed, hinting at a journey long forgotten.
Just as I was about to take a closer look at the map, I heard a soft whisper. My heart stopped. “Hello?” I called out, my voice shaky as I scanned the room, but there was only silence in reply. I felt a rush of panic surge through me. “Kailangan ko nang umalis dito,” I thought, adrenaline kicking in.
But I couldn’t pull myself away from the mystery that lay in front of me. “Maybe it’s just my imagination?” I said, trying to reassure myself, but deep down, I knew the whispers felt too real. What if there’s something else in this room? Something waiting for me to discover?
I glanced back at the door, now shrouded in darkness. What if it closes behind me? The thought sent a jolt of fear through my veins. The unease was palpable, a heavy weight pressing down on me. I had to know what these items meant.
“Okay, Ael, focus,” I told myself, biting my lip as I unfolded the map. Lines and markings crisscrossed it, the faded ink suggesting paths that twisted and turned, leading to places I could barely comprehend. “This is… unbelievable,” I murmured, feeling a thrill run down my spine.
Just as I began to trace the lines with my finger, a loud thud resonated from somewhere deep within the passage. I froze, heart racing. “What was that?!” I whispered, every instinct screaming for me to run.
I looked around, the shadows now feeling like they were closing in, the air thick with tension. “I think I need to get out of here,” I said, but something kept me rooted to the spot. The key, the compass, the map—did they hold the answers I was seeking?
Suddenly, the door behind me creaked ominously, and I turned, panic rising in my throat. It was ajar, revealing an inky darkness beyond, a void that felt alive with anticipation.
“Okay, that’s enough adventure for one night,” I muttered, trying to steady my breath. But the door began to close on its own, and I rushed forward, feeling the weight of unseen forces pulling me back.
“Wait! Don’t close!” I shouted, lunging for the door, but my fingers brushed against the cold wood just as it snapped shut. A chilling silence fell over the room, and I was left alone in the darkness, heart pounding.
“Now what?” I breathed, feeling the rush of panic rising again. I could hear the faint whispers in the distance, drawing me deeper into the shadows. “Was it a mistake to come here?”
And just then, as I stood there, enveloped in darkness, the air shifted, and I could have sworn I heard a voice—soft and beckoning—coming from the shadows.
“Aelion…”
My heart raced as I strained to listen. Who or what was calling my name?
The whispers swirled around me like a haunting melody, luring me deeper into the unknown. I stood frozen, torn between fear and an insatiable curiosity, knowing that I was now part of a story much larger than I had ever imagined.
What secrets lay hidden in the darkness, waiting to be uncovered?

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    Let Let Naga

    i love this story

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    SangVan Nei

    123

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    HaliluAbubakar

    very nice

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